good. i think it could have been better, you should come out more in the video... we barely see you "act". you understand? we want to see you act. But i do have to say the voice over was good, you had a good tone :D Keep it up :D
The video seems good except, with all the loud music in the background, i could barely hear you.... next time try to lower the music a little bit, so pople can heard you more, btw good editing :D